Thursday, March 26, 2015

Moving Along

     I'm moving forward with the manuscript, but I still cherish the encouragement for the prequel offered by EE, my Editor Extraordinaire.

     "Mahlon hooked his arm around Kilion’s neck and pulled him down into submission. A familiar wrestling match erupted. 

     “The dining table is no place for your sparring matches.” Elimelech chided. “Come. Let’s wash our hands and then you can take it outside.”  

     Naomi noticed a wistful look as her husband went to supervise his sons, abandoning her to her labors. Could it be that he’s growing weary too?" 
p. 5   

"Great revision." EE comment

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