I'm moving forward with the manuscript, but I still cherish the encouragement for the prequel offered by EE, my Editor Extraordinaire.
"Mahlon hooked his arm around Kilion’s neck and pulled him down into submission. A familiar wrestling match erupted.
“The dining table is no place for your sparring matches.” Elimelech chided. “Come. Let’s wash our hands and then you can take it outside.”
Naomi noticed a wistful look as her husband went to supervise his sons, abandoning her to her labors. Could it be that he’s growing weary too?"
"Great revision." EE comment