The prequel is polished and ready to move to the next phase.
Feel free to cover me with prayer while I learn the process of getting it into print.
I'll keep sharing comments from my EE (Editor Extraordinaire) for you to read while you wait.
"Elimelech grabbed his wrist. 'You will not speak to your mother in that rude manner. She works hard to care for us. You will heed your speech and attitudes in accordance with the messages Yahweh delivered on Sinai.' He released his grip but locked his son in place with a piercing stare."
Elimelech to Mahlon, p. 3
Naomi: Desperate Times
"Boom! Nice." EE
*personally I don't think Naomi looked this old, even on her way back to Bethlehem
What say you?